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Slightly Obsessive 2005-08-28 . chapter 3
This is so good! However, i would like a little bit more information about the assasin. Male/female, physical characteristics, etc. Will any other major characters be introduced?
Mythic-Scribbles 2005-04-17 . chapter 3
This is really intriguing so far. I'm interested to see where you take it. The introductiong to your first chapter was particularly good, mentioning historical figures such as Nefertiti.A thought on Ghost: I don't know if you would want to add this to his character, but I thought when he says "To be honest I don’t need the scope. I could just as easily go without it, it’s convenient but not essential." maybe he woud talk about how the more convenient the weapons are made, the less skill is needed or something. Because peoples skill do tend to deteriorate when they don't need them as much.Mythic
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