You scare me. Because you amaze me. First found you through some reviews you left someone... and even they scared & amazed me... haha. So I came to check out what you've written.

And any mistakes I can find I am afraid might possibly have been on purpose.

Frightening. Honestly.

Interesting. The story line/plot was sometimes a bit hard to follow, and the grammar had sort of sporadic sanity. I liked it, though, the intricate descriptions were entertaining. The characters were both distant and raw at the same time.

I'd like to thank you for the reviews -- they were suprisingly detailed and actually gave critism, which I enjoyed. What struck me really, was the fact that any faults you pointed out were pretty accurate. I always loved to use the pretty words, the interesting ones, and therefore sounded overwritten (an atrocity that I think we might have in common).

I find it very suited that someone so passionatly anti-angst doesn't feel all 'fuzzy' about my character. Hmm... but you are mistaken on one aspect: I have never believed my sarcasm to be of any importance, it just makes me smile.

I apologize for this review being very self-centered, and I'm glad that you can stomach my uber!angst. I ** to a seventeen-inch monitor so that I don't have to ** to people I actually care about. Pretty much the standard thing on this site.

Yo! Well...um, how high is a "large lemon" exactly? Anyways, while the order and grammatical layout of your description is unconventional and not altogether correct, it makes it an interesting reading experience. I sort of felt like I was also high while reading it. You've got some run-ons and comma splices, too, but I suppose it's all part of the high. Oh, and you switch tenses from present to past a few times. Otherwise...eh, whatever, man! :b