Oh, my god, that is so FREAKING SAD! It made me want to cry. Why are jews always the ones to get beat up? WHY THE HELL DOES EVERYONE WANT TO KILL PEOPLE BECAUSE OF RELIGION?!!?!?!?!

I like this, especially since a bit more original then the ones I normally see. The descriptions are pretty damn saddening, which is good in the way you wrote it. Of course everything could be improved, but I have nothing to criticize. I wonder, are you going to continue with this little piece or is it a shorty?