these lines really stick out: "at my keyboard i pour my heart out to the keys, knowing all the same that no one will listen or care."such an empty feeling yet conveyed so richly here.

No one will listen or care? Oh come now, we both know thats really not true. For one thing, your fans certanly seem to care a lot. And if it makes you happy, or even content for a moment, then you care as well. You need to learn that charades are rarely worth it in the end. Be you. It is painful, but has greater rewards than any false happiness ever will.

Quote, "At my keyboard

I pour my heart out

To the keys,

Knowing all the same

That no one will listen

Or care."

I don't even really know you but I care. That was a good poem too.

Do you play piano? I love that feeling it has over you, it can drain you or give you what you need. It's like writing when you're angry. You start out all ** an d furious, but by the time your on the second sentence you've lost most of you're drive.

Anozer, for ze favoureets!

We do care Amy, and we would never judge you. I love you and you will always be my best friend through it all. ALWAYS! I miss you, yours through everything,jessi

They -do- care. You just have to -find- the people who care.

I care...I really do. Not that matters much, but you should know how many people really do care.

It's hard when you're feeling crummy and there's no one to talk to huh? Yet here you are sending this out to - what? - thousands of readers. You'd be surprised to find who cares because everyone goes through this at some point in their life. This is well written becuase someone can tell exactly how your feeling. (Which can sometimes can be a hard thing to express..) ~Ember's Fire~

Very complete in all terseness (not too sure if terseness is a word, but terse is so work with me)

One must realize, however, that apathy is no substitute for true happiness. Numb is not happy merely in the logic that it is not pain.

That was really good. It sounds like the way I feel sometimes.Kudos,Michelle

Wonderfully written. I often feel the same way.

I can relate to this.This is a great poem it has amazing metaphor and i appreciate this poem a lot because I can relate.

this is so emotional and touching. It has truth of sadness and looking. I hope things get better.

~Sorrow~

and again weird, but nice.

this is very good. I can definitely relate to it too! great job!