wow. That was scary. I hope nothing like that ever happened to you...it'd make me sad. But if it didn't happen to you, you do a really great job of describing how she feels. And i like how you made it seem like the man had two different personalities...like the drunk one that beats her the evil one...and the nice, unsure one. Sucks that he can't just be the nice one instead of both. This was great writing, as always.

I love it! It was so...it was like your heart was breaking but you had to do it. I didn't like the lowecase i's much, but it did add a unique touch.