i realyy like this. it gave me chills, since suicide could happen, with the people that you least expect. good job. =)

oo i like the it only takes one smile to hide a million tears...man how sad...i hate to cry, nice poem

Beautiful wording. That phrase is so haunting...

Very powerful subject.I like the short poemIt had a strong ending.The message is it thing I look for.Why dont people reveal there feelings?Are they afriad of getting hurt?I questiion myself as I struggle to find someone to confort me.Great Poem It going in my favorties!Please R&R soem of mine. Great Poem

I like the poem. About what you think something feels off with the poem, I think is that the style of the poem changes with every paragraph. I personally like a poem with changing styles but usually a transition is needed so that the poem doesn't sound awkward, maybe think of changing a bit the middle paragraph so it serves as a transition paragraph. But it's all depending on your own taste and style. But overall I like the poem and enjoyed it, I’ll be looking for more of your work soon.