"The only reason he lives now

Is to die"

A very simple, but excellent line; a very simple, but excellent poem.

Hey Hey! Great poem, I really like narrative poetry, and this one is beautifully sad, and very deep. It kinda portrays the life of some people, and how they grow more miserable as time goes by, and really, its depressing, and cruel of life. Noone would really expect it to happen to them when they've got a house and a family an all that **..it just happens that ur alone in your very last moments.. Gives you alot to contemplate about..*shudders* Oh, and Thanx for your amazingly fantastic reviews! You kick arse! Bless your little socks! Heh.. Meme

NICE!! I love peoms with a story and a meaning. It really gets to me. This one was especially bomb, and you deserve recognition and applause (especially because you got two reviews before I even saw it.) So, I give it two thumbs up (and allow you to take a bow). Congratulations, and good job.

Aww, that is so sad! Death is inevitable. But to die in such a tragic way is...*reach out for a handkerchief*

A man can only do what he can u know.

a neivity i can yell to u now that i know life is so unfair

place time person spirit

they plot against u

a man can only do what he can