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| Liebe Sasa 2005-04-19 ch 1,  | abuseI liked the opening line and the last few. Something seemed a bit off in the second and third lines, but I liked the poem overall. I'm not too good at poetry myself, so I can't give much advice. Good idea behind it. ~Sasa |
| Relayer 2005-04-18 ch 1, | abuseInteresting image |