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| CoolBeans18s 2005-04-18 ch 1,  | abuseWhat I found most intriguing about this piece - forgive me if I've interpreted it wrong >_< - is how you seem to, in the first stanza, be comparing the brain to machine? Grey matter and electric purring? The rest of the poem was just as interesting - the format especially is pretty cool. ^_^ ~ CoolBeans |
| oksana 2005-04-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseunexpected and well written. enjoyed much. Check out some of my stuff if you have time at my account: oksana. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-04-18 ch 1, | abuseThis is wonderful even if the format appears not to be correct. This just is very eloquent |