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| Neried 2005-09-01 ch 1,  | abuseI loved the imagery you used in this poem. 'Breathlessly unfurlinginto the pre-dawn oxygen,the fragile green of newborn leavesshudders, gasps transluscently'The metaphors work together really well, too. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-04-18 ch 1, | abuseLovely and breathtaking |
| linaeve 2005-04-18 ch 1, | abusebeautiful oh stunning personifications & imagery. simply lovely. |