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| Moonjava 2005-05-30 ch 1,  | abuseVery nice. All though I admit that I kind of get conflicting images with the poem. But it's really good writing. |
| smile persephone 2005-05-01 ch 1, | abuseThis sends mixed signal (I don't know if that's just me). It's a powerful poem, though. I can almost smell the mingling scents of citrus and blood. Nicely done! |
| Pete GK 2005-04-30 ch 1, | abuseThis is an interesting poem. Its not bad, like you said it was. But I think im missing something, like it has an underlying message that Im not understanding. Whatever, still a good poem.Pete |
| rosebud90 2005-04-18 ch 1, | abusegood poem, keep writing! Please review my poems! |
| Stassney 2005-04-18 ch 1, | abusewow ... this really makes me think ... i absolutely love the first two lines |
| Blue Abyss 2005-04-18 ch 1, | abuseGod I love your stuff so much. Its all so amazing. |