Very nice. All though I admit that I kind of get conflicting images with the poem. But it's really good writing.

This sends mixed signal (I don't know if that's just me). It's a powerful poem, though. I can almost smell the mingling scents of citrus and blood. Nicely done!

This is an interesting poem. Its not bad, like you said it was. But I think im missing something, like it has an underlying message that Im not understanding. Whatever, still a good

good poem, keep writing! Please review my poems!

wow ... this really makes me think ... i absolutely love the first two lines

God I love your stuff so much. Its all so amazing.