Reviews for Twisted Lies Of A Friend

AngelBabyWingz85 2005-07-03 ch 1,	abuseOmg, I can so relate to this. This has happened to me before, you captured it wonderfully, bravo!
andy 2005-06-22 ch 1, anon.	abusethis is cool, maybe a conventional poem after a couple of those would be good? the end doesn't really tie it all up too well.
life like whoa 2005-04-21 ch 1,	abuseWow, I liked how you made it as though she's talking but then you show what she's thinking. A creative twist I must say! Nicely done, and I don't think it's honestly that bad. I enjoyed it!
Zephyr Zaelza 2005-04-19 ch 1,	abuseThis one was sad, I liked the way you wrote it, like this person is talking but what he's thinking is the total opposite. Really cool, I like it. Keep it up! -Zephyr Zaelza
His Only 2005-04-18 ch 1,	abuseOh gosh!! That was soo... aww. The person just seemed so wicked to have all those thoughts about someone. Aww! Having said that I hope you weren't the one thinking that way :8 lol. Anyways, I wouldn't say that this is a bad poem, I just found it to be different from your others. I actually really liked it. Not because it was mean and sad, but I loved this style. It was neat. Great work with this and the rhyming worked well. Keep it up! And God Bless!