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| FrozenKiwi 2005-09-06 ch 1,  | abuseThis is great. Very lovely. Thanks for your review, and keep up the good work. |
| Wishdreamer89 2005-07-22 ch 1, | abuseHey, I really like your poetry and what you've got to say because you're also african-american like me and I rarely see them with the love of poetry like this and I'm glad i've fount one. And I like your cinderella story- is it continued somewhere else I'd wanna read :) so ttyl and I like this poem too bye |
| lackluster 2005-07-20 ch 1, | abusegorgeous. and very true. i admire how you write about real-life situations but you add little poetic touches to them. |
| AlwaysAmberella 2005-07-20 ch 1, | abusevery interesting metaphorical situation. This is a really unique poem, and I really enjoyed reading it. Solo. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-05-10 ch 1, | abuseYou are the fourth! :) Or at least that is good, confidence and knowledge is always helpful in this life. |
| simpleplan13 2005-05-10 ch 1, | abusebeautifully written & i love the whoel game thing... tahnks for your review |
| Elven-eyed mortal 2005-04-26 ch 1, | abuseOo, interesting metaphor. I never really thought of it like that, but it's true. soft glance,Elven_eyed Mortal |
| Kenishiro 2005-04-24 ch 1, | abuseI think you're the fourth ballerina, one who is sure of herself, am I right? |
| inferno tempest 2005-04-22 ch 1, | abuseit is absolutely great! |
| The System Mother 2005-04-20 ch 1, | abuseOh wow! A mesmerizingly fantastic poem! ^_^ Thanks fer the review! |
| Cloud Burst 2005-04-20 ch 1, | abusevery beautiful, ur lines flow together very well. i really liked the first two stanzas. i think theres a message that goes beyond the open cover of ur poem, subtle but sure. awesome job! |
| CW-nerd-12 2005-04-19 ch 1, | abuse*with horrible fake Spice-girls accent* girl powah! Mwahahaha. Good for you for keeping your legs together, Nowadays the only way for teenagers to truly shock people about sex is to say, "um, no thank you, I'm not interested..." Anyway, the poem is good, but watch for cliches like "curiosity killed the cat," a poet's always gotta have new stuff, ya know? But this is good! Refusing to be a ho! Yeah! |
| Thyrt 2005-04-19 ch 1, | abusethat was really really good! and so easy to understand! great job |
| l057 1n51d3 2005-04-19 ch 1, | abusebeautiful. i loved it ^^ t.s. |
| account not in use 2005-04-19 ch 1, | abuseI love the imagery and the vocab choice, I could actaully see all this happening in my head. Thanks for the review! |