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| the naked civil servant 2006-04-24 ch 1,  | abusei have fallen violently in love with this poem, and announce my engagement to the italicized lines in particular (if you will give us your blessing). absolutely GORGEOUS, so fresh & aching &... oh, just everything i wish i could say personified, a torrent of truth & beauty & shame. i'm sorry. it is God. |
| myno 2005-07-14 ch 1, | abusei see why you didn't attempt a summary of this poem- it's hard to sum up. Lovely write, excellent imagery and tone. |
| Cloud Burst 2005-07-13 ch 1, | abuselovely flow and great choice of words! splendid indeed! =) |
| innzie 2005-05-08 ch 1, | abuseWicked poem. i love the way you have used your creativity and your way of writing is very unique. I know all the reviewers have said it... but i do love the imagery :P Innzie X |
| StormyBelle 2005-04-19 ch 1, | abuseThis is a haunting poem. I love the imagery, and am impressed. There are not many people who could come up with as many names for purple. I especially like the line, "his sorrow is hollowed ash". Beautiful. Thanks,Laura |
| swift sky silver 2005-04-18 ch 1, | abuse... and purple is my favourite colour... i like the range of vocab especially. keep writing =0) |
| catseyeview 2005-04-18 ch 1, | abuseunbelievable imagery and description! on the fav stories list |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-04-18 ch 1, | abuseWonderful and elegant. lovely focus on a certain mood with certain colors. |