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| Sovereign Chung 2006-09-22 ch 1,  | abuseOne word came to mind after reading this. "Brilliant" I actually said it outloud. Amazing short story, it captivated me and just made me smile. It seems so complete, and I'm happy I read it. It didn't feel like I wasted ten minutes of my life. Amazing amazing job. |
| skylines 2006-05-29 ch 1, | abuseOh my. The red ink part is very familiar to me, I wrote a poem about it. I thought this was going to be a rape story, but you just kept surprises coming. Physcotic poet gone mad. Very familiar. The police in the end scence were really creepy. Nauseating. But this was brilliant and I have no other comments. You write excellent horror. |
| Hi! 2005-10-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseI enjoyed this story. It was pretty intersting. I think the French accent was unique...With that said, you should do what you want and not let the meanie pants who bark 'change something' ruin anything you do! |
| IrishVampire13 2005-06-08 ch 1, | abuseThere's no point to your lady cop having a French accent. Your story doesn't take place anywhere where French is spoken. Fix it. |
| Cindy Moon 2005-04-25 ch 1, | abuseHow incredibly delicious! I quite thouroughly enjoyed this one. You never cease to amaze me. I have no complaints with this one. You've managed to weave in pop culture mundane-ness with the incredible and unheard of insanity! ^^ Teehee, I love the woman's accent. -Cindy Moon *) |
| FledglingFictitioner 2005-04-20 ch 1, | abuseGood stuff. I like the feel of it overall. One thing I have to say though, is that I liked the ending before the two cops turned into meat-addicted freaks. It's really up to you, but I think you can just end it with the part about the epidermises. Either way, it was a fun read. And I like the image of the candy canes and barber poles. Cool stuff. |