I like that one, I really like that one. It's really good.

i like the last two lines but can't say i agree with the poem entirely

Very fluid.Almost buddhist in the sense that the present is all there is.A very good lesson of living without regret worth knowing.

this is something i'd never thought of before... now i get to look at things a whole new way! this is really deep and powerful. i

Hmm, I like this one!

I like your poetry it all is so original and thought of in a way that makes the poem so original. i never thought of it this way, interesting concept!

Great poem. It's so true, in a sense. I like the last line best.

this is really good. I can see reality in it. and the flow is great. keep up the great work!

~Sorrow~

hm. weird but good.

Ooh! I like. I like the idea in this one and the way you've written it... nice ending too, neat way to complete it. Great work!

I really like this. It's almost like good advice that I really need right now.. great job with this!

I like this piece, and I agree almost completely with its (your?) philosophy towards life, and how to take the events that happen to us all. Good Work.

"and marvel at the fall" - gave me chills!i liked the punctuation in this piece, it really provided great emphasis on the most important words