 BlackendThornRose 2005-07-20 . chapter 1I really loved this poem. I am adding to my favorites. It was very well written. |
 i-rite-gud 2005-07-01 . chapter 1That's really cute. I know cute sounds weird but that's how I'm gonna describe it. |
 misery re 2005-06-21 . chapter 1The concept of this poem is amazing. You truly made my jaw drop with this poem. VERY WELL DONE. |
 DailyLatte 2005-06-19 . chapter 1Wow this is a very powerful piece of art. I love your writing. Thanks for the review you gave me. |
 Sacred-Phoenix-Nephthys 2005-05-12 . chapter 1You are right, you paint your own portrait. I loved this poem, i can't belive how much you put into it, in only a few lines. It is just incredible. I loved this.
R&R some of my work, and i'll return the favour ^_^ |
 Ebony Rain Fall 2005-05-11 . chapter 1i like the last 2 lines and the overall idea. nice job. |
 Poetic-Passion 2005-04-21 . chapter 1I like this poem a lot! |
 InnerBeauty 2005-04-20 . chapter 1I like this poem, it has a lot of meaning and its what I needed to read thanks for writing this! |
 Sorrowful Dreams 2005-04-19 . chapter 1this is really good. the flow is great and the emotions are great! I love the description and the metaphors. great work!
~Sorrow~ |
 Coping Mechanism 2005-04-19 . chapter 1Well I like it. The title is spelled wrong though. It's "Portrait" not 'Portrit.'But other than that it was pretty good. |
 Jazzie Kings 2005-04-19 . chapter 1Wow that was awesome. Great poem, i love the imagery it provides.
Keep up the good work and thanks for your review.
~Jazzie Kings |
 chewing GUM 2005-04-19 . chapter 1Very nice. I like it, |
 thedarkthatiwas 2005-04-19 . chapter 1Nice, very very nice. I like! a lot. The imagery is stunning... I ca see exactly what you are saying. Short but very, very sweet poem. Great work, I like! |
 Black Pen 2005-04-18 . chapter 1this is really good...some are the lines are surprising - not what one would expect when one reads it. But it's good and very clear. |
 Sakura Himitsu 2005-04-18 . chapter 1Gets the point across, simple and dark in a way. I like it. Good job ^_^ |