alright well i just finished reading your story and i like it a lot. i love opi, he is so sweet. anyway, i am still a bit confused about this final battle and what is going on and stuff. hopefully in future chapters you will be able to clear that up?? hopefully there are future chapters...? anyway good job and i hope to read more of this story soon.

i like how the story goes. the plot is very original. there's a good deal of suspense and excitement. the way you write it is totally fabulous. its really great.

ps: i've updated my story. =) you can check it out if you wanna.

Nice chapter, and I know I'm very late. I plan on checking out your other stories soon.

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First off, thank you so much for reviewing not one, but two of my stories *worships*

Back on track, your writing is great- however, you could try sticking in a bit more description. Right now, there's a lot of dialogue, which is great (and something I have problems with, hence the near complete lack in my writing) but it's a bit hard to visualize anything other than the character's eyes. Also, the scene in the middle of the second chapter threw me off a bit- perhaps that could start off the chapter, then have the rest after it?

You have a budding talent- I anticipate more writing from you ^^

Awesome first chapter, very intriguing. Can't wait to hear more about her powers and such.

omg my bestest friend! this story is awesome. i love it! keep writing! cause i want to know what happens!

Once again it's lovely... and cliffhangers are evil. *tear* Oh well! Keep it up I can't wait for more. ^^

kewl story, dude! rock on!

Oh **, Opi knocked her up. *slaps Opi* Bad Opi! Do you have any idea what that could do to even the most sane women! Bad Opi!

But her's a sucker with the name Kyra on it. =D

Good chapter, I like it. Though I just had to say that. You got me a little confused though on who was talking. Try to give more hints on that.§Black Gumdrop§

It's short, but good none the less.

This story has a great plot, but the way you've written it is kind of confusing. You sometimes skip from one part to the next and lots of things are put together a bit randomly. I don't mean to critisize or give out insults, I'm just saying what I think. So yeah. PS: Check out my story, "Heroine of the Universe"

Writers block is evil. Glad I could help. So keep coninuing. Also, nice to see you introduce the light vampire. Makes it more interesting.

Although I think Kyra should die. . .Opi is MINE! Just kidding.

Great story. Although I think you should bring in some other character. Like a light vampire or something like that. Hearing about them only does so much.

this could be a better story, I'm sad to say. It could have been written alot better.

Wow, this is a really cool story. Best I've read in a while. Keep it up.