 Saeger 2005-12-18 . chapter 1 It's the lycan being turned! He decided he wanted to, after the 6 months... Or is it a she? I think the vamp's male, but you never specify on either case... Hmm...I was so close, my first guess! But I couldn't word it right. That's neat. You've gotta write one for after the change... How he/she reacts. |
 Limeligh Lover 2005-05-09 . chapter 1 It was good and i'm not gonna guess 'cause i'd probably get it wrong! anyway, it was good! |
 Saeger 2005-04-19 . chapter 1reviwer intelligence scale? I'm a zero, cuz I cant think straight when I try to explain it all.
But that was... *neat*. Almost scriptlike, but very much not... Interesting form, interesting scene. It'd be a pleasant surprise to see more of this. |
 Kaimelar, Ruler of Hyarme 2005-04-19 . chapter 1Well, the one is evidentally a vampire, being somehow "fixed" of his vampirism, perhaps. The other is somehow using magic, or some...hm...device to do something, possibly removing teeth. It is kind of vague... |
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