A sequel?
Yay! I'm squealing with joy! The suspense at some points was killing me. Character development is strong and everything. This story has a heart-wrenching ending...and totally has me entranced.
Beautiful.

XOXO,
Juliet

Hello!
I'm Juliet, the girl who made the newest FP site A Drop of Romeo.
Your story was nominated, I read it...and I felt it deserved to get on the site. Every story that gets on the site gets a personal review from moi.
This story is drop-dead amazing. The first chapter is so intruiging...it immediately captures the reader's attention. At least, it got MY attention. I loved the way I could feel the story pacing...
And about the later chapters...gosh, the romance is intense and smoldering. Love it.

XOXO,
Juliet.

This story is amazing and that said, i will be moving on to the sequel.

An interesting start to this story, i can't wait to read more!

Sweetbread... is meat.
Otherwise, it's good.
Although you should definitely make the blackmailing stop. It makes me sad.
Not really, it's part of the plot and all, but still.

Basterd he deserved it! bah how many wives does he need!

ooh, love it already sounds good! :D

the sexual tension in this chap seems a bit too silly. The description is too dramatic and 'flowery'. I dont know how to explain it but I didnt feel any sexual tension. It needs to be more real, more feeling, worded better so that the emotions and physical feelings hold more depth and are more real to the reader

:) And all I've got to say is that I'm happy for a sequel.

Such a moving chapter! D: I was so hoping for a happy ending, but I guess at least Aliana didn't die. ): And Ren's plot has been foiled. :) Buu, but huzzah for the king and queen! :)

I really loved how this story turned out. ;) The plot was extremely unique. :3 I'm glad I was recommended it~ Ohoho! A wonderful story indeed!

...I keep on believing that at least one of them would escape. At least Ti! D: But nuu, my hope is always crushed. -mumbles-

D: So close to the end. I wonder how Cicario will patch things up... O: Loved the chapter~

LOL. And my suspicion comes true here. XD Buu, I hate Ren! D:

3; So suspenseful~ Great job~

O: I feel sorry for the two with Ren interfering with their lives. :\ I kept on being wary of whether or not they'd be found out. XD The romantic feelings between the two were especially strong in this chapter (of course, partially because of the ending). :) Tee hee~ Great job!

D: I had my suspicions that they cut off his tongue when he didn't speak to her. After all, I know he still treasures her, so why wouldn't he speak? ): Ren must die! Kill him! D; This was a very sad and well written chapter. ):

O: A sudden hug! I thought that she would have been sad and frightened of approaching him again. But I'm wrong! :D Haha~ Great work~!