|Reviews for Land of Red|
| leavesfallingup 5/20/13 . chapter 1
Slavery was so much a part of daily life not so many centuries ago. Now it is difficult for most of us to conceive of a reality such as you describe... or to imagine that we, in the same situation, wouldn't constantly be seeking a means of escape. You handle the subject matter well. It should be an interesting story
| Fiery Dancer 5/19/13 . chapter 19
Haha I couldn't put this story down! Hope you update the sequel soon :)
| HelloLovelyIHateYou 4/24/13 . chapter 18
God fuckin' damn lady. I think Karus is my favorite character. "I dare not, my lord, lest you poison me too." I laughed out loud at that part for five minutes. Best part, I think. Good job!
| Ladyodd 3/4/13 . chapter 18
A nice short story, fun to read. Can't wait to read the sequel.
| lollipop addict 2/28/13 . chapter 1
| Sucker For Sodium 2/24/13 . chapter 18
I don't think I've ever read a 'proper' story involving a harem, to be honest. It's not something you usually stumble upon and decide to read. Your summary captured my interested though and I found myself liking this.
I like your characterisation. And the way Ti was treated (regarding his tongue and all) is something I think could be a very plausible thing to happen in scenarios such as the one where Aliana asked for his life to be spared.
Of course it was sad to see Cicario and Aliana part ways in the end (even though forcefully), but I guess that is why you've decided to publish a sequel. Thank you for writing this and I wish you all the best in the future.
| absentmindedprofessor 12/29/12 . chapter 3
Poor Aliana. Ren is such a jerk!
| absentmindedprofessor 12/29/12 . chapter 2
I'm glad that I stumbled across this story - so far, it sounds very intriguing. I was expecting it to be like most of the other slave-girl stories, with an annoying heroine and irritating master but I like Aliana and Ren's behaviour appears to have a background. I probably won't review every chapter (most likely I'll be caught up in it :D) but I will try to at least comment a few more times. I really like it so far. :) But I guess your 800 other reviewers have probably told you that already.
| R. Ficst 12/15/12 . chapter 17
"The reason her skin is red is because the plot was originally going to be very, very different. Her skin had a high significance. But now you don't have to worry about all that. The plot is changed."
I don't suppose you might consider sharing what the reason used to be?
| HalfwayParanoid 10/30/12 . chapter 18
OMG, I am crying. This was soo good, and sooo sad.
You did good, no spelling errors or grammar errors.
I loved it.
| gulistanlik 10/12/12 . chapter 6
Oh gosh she should know better, he's going to get caught! Oh man.
| Elia 9/25/12 . chapter 10
I liked the way you switched to Cicario's PoV, I really thought Aliana was dead because of this haha
| Fabulous Georgina 8/10/12 . chapter 18
This ending was so sad! But I truly did love it. The characters and the setting were all so vivid and I the story had an acceptable amount of twists and turns. I can't wait to read the sequel. Great job, definitely one of the faves :)
| delight.full 8/2/12 . chapter 18
A great read, I really enjoyed it. Aliana has more courage and strength then she thinks, and it really showed through in the end. I fully appreciate the bittersweet ending you wrote. Much more believable that way. Thanks for sharing this story!
| Yeasayer 7/13/12 . chapter 18
wow! this was incredible!