hahaha yes! Thats fantastic lol I love it, a new take on the greek gods, thats great haha

..."went ** batshit crazy on my infant **." hahaha. keep on writing.

THAT WAS AWESOME! KEEP WRITING. I LOVE IT. There's a couple small spelling mistakes but, it's WONDERFUL. R & R

you have something going there.. you really should update it.

I really liked it. Eros as the narrator was very interesting. Brings a new light to Greek/Roman mythology. This piece intrigued me much.

"Eros" is very witty. It never occurred to me--a noir Greek myth. But I should have realized--every film noir is motivated by a femme fatale, so of course it is secretly driven by that hardboiled chubby private eye Eros! Have you ever seen the 1955 film noir Kiss Me Deadly? The femme fatale opens a nuclear-age Pandora's box.

I like this. Nice sense of voice and all that great stuff. I look forward to more...hopefully you have something in mind to add to this, because I think there's more story there. If I've overlooked it, let me know.

In reading this, I see someone that, given enough time and refinement, could pen something worthy of full retail price. Being an avid reader, that says a lot. That is not to detract from the work at hand - it is, in and of itself, a good read, albeit far too short. - It makes you want to know MORE, dammit.

This was one of those that as stated previously, makes you anticipate a futhering of the story.

Good work, and I look forward to following your writing in the future.

I really did enjoy this story, although nothing has really been made clear about the actual plot. Because of that, I highly look forward to the updating of this tale.

Interesting idea. I hope there's more to this. I like your style of writing. There are some short clipped sentences mixed in with long descriptive ones, and this mixture contributes to the tone of it. I've seen a lot of people try to use this balance, but not a lot of them are good at it. You've done it pretty well though, reading through it feels natural.