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| SpawnMeister666 2005-05-03 ch 1,   | I've been meaning to review this for ages but keep on managing to not get around to it! Anyway, very well written and this has served to make me even more certain that parenthood is not something I wish to put at the top of my priority list right now! Spawny |
| Unholy Haven 2005-04-30 ch 1, | Well written! |
| Dobbygrl 2005-04-27 ch 1, | Thank you for reviewing my abortion outline/speech. I really appriciate the input and it will really help me for writing a speech in the future. Thank you! |
| poetic abortion 2005-04-19 ch 1, | At first I thought you were talking about young kids, but the ending made it pretty clear. lol Beautiful poem, I laughed pretty damn hard while reading this. XD Keep up the good work! !~* Noelle *~! |
| katmonkey 2005-04-19 ch 1, | About one of your kids? I love the imagery of "Volcanic screams, molten tears" Very effective and the last two lines made me laugh. Nicely written! Am just emailing you re: the formatting. *lime-girl* |
| TiEka Koniku 2005-04-19 ch 1, | umm... ok. rather interesting. i cant really say anything about this. it good... *TI* |
| WhispersInTheDark 2005-04-19 ch 1, | I really enjoyed this poem... especially the angst. I feel like this entirely too often ;) keep writing... |