I like the idea

but I really felt like it should've been longer.

It felt more like a fragment of a poem, rather than a very short poem itself.

Maybe that's the way you meant to come across, but I'm just saying what I got from it.

It is a very cute little piece though.

Luna Turner

I like this one a lot! :)

RM review #2!

Aw, I love it! This is a very original idea. It's very lighthearted and fun, yet serious at the same time. It kind of reminded me of myself. My friend in sixth grade actually tried to pay me to smile once. I'd just like to point out that you spelled "just" wrong in the summary. Kind of a turn off, you know? Great job with this!

aw short and sweet. haha someone's in love...

Wonderful.

aw. so sweet!

Very nice. Wonderfully done.

Again, you're able to say so much in so little words. I think that's a great gift! Awesome poem!

Much love, Rosanna.

i see that and i wanna say "aw!"

You are amazing my friend just amazing, I thought it was a feat to get 25 ppl with me on their favs list, now I look at you and I feel small. Of course then there's looking at the num of words archived, I have almost twice as many as you do but it seems you're more loved than I am...wow, you have such a way with people, not to metion words...it's the num of reviews you send out isn't it? You're a saint with those reviews...I try to take my time on my reviews, making each one as special as I can...if you ever run into someone with a review of mine, chances are it's be really long...I guess that's just me huh, you keep up that great work!

Much Love, Gaki Toki

The free things in life are of invaluable worth. Great haiku.

sweet...

Such a gentle wish, very sweet and endearing.

yeah it would be, especially as it is priceless. :) i like this. nicely done.

aw...so sweet D

muchLUB-kerr