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Jeweline
2008-06-27
ch 8,
abuseokay so basically i'm in love with this amazing story. First of all, the dialogue between Lex and Julian is so aggrivating (i honestly have no idea how to spell that. I'll probably realize the correct spelling sometime tomorrow at a random point in my life...LOL), so much that it makes me feel irritated, as much as a reader can and in the best way a reader can! Second, I love Lex's character, and if I do say so myself, she reminds me of me, which is pretty col. Anyhoobies, if you're still around updating Bitter Blood please come over here and add more to this wonderful creation of yours! :]

-Jewelinie
Jeweline
2008-06-27
ch 1,
abuseI'm basically in love with this story! I wish you'd update!
sunny-raindrop
2008-06-16
ch 8,
abuseHi! I've just read this story and it's great. You must continue it (soon)! It's freshening after thousands of high school romances and I love the tension and competition which is always there between the main characters. I was afraid before starting to read it 'cause I saw how long you didn't update it. I was afraid that I might like it and I can't read it onwards. Well, I was right. I liked it. And it ends with a cliffhanger? That's cruel. Anyway, you have a fantastic storyline so please don't abandon it! Bye
Lightsflashing
2008-05-22
ch 8, anon.
abuseHi, I just read your story and I really liked it. I am SO curious about what happens during dinner. Something that you might want to think about might be making a scene explaining why Julian is so bitter. I mean, you should say it more bluntly if it is his nature.
Jacoblover
2008-05-15
ch 8,
abusei just started reading this story and it is amazing. the style you write in is so good, and it is so well written. this story is so original, it's refreshing compared to all the usual stories on this site. please update soon. don't give up on this story, it's too good.
Okazaki
2007-08-15
ch 8,
abuseI really like this story and I hope you will update/finish this soon.
richtly
2007-07-03
ch 8, anon.
abuseYou have to update this story very soon, you promised!! Remember you said, "If not, my soul shall wither away in the dismal confines of hell." You said! So update!! Please!
Timishica
2007-06-26
ch 7, anon.
abuseWell I have already revieved this story many times, so much that the computer told me that I had to reveiw on a differint chaper since there were so many on chaper 8. Exept I used a different name so...\..

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OK THE REAL REASON I WROT THIS WAS TO BEG YOU TO UPDATE! I REALLY LIKE THE STORY LINE, AND I WOULD REALLY LIKE TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! SO PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!
tlw1
2007-06-16
ch 8,
abuseSo sad you haven't been able to update this - have you given up on this story completely? I hope not. I really enjoyed it and would love to see more.
uNkOWN
2007-06-04
ch 8, anon.
abusesTIlL wAITING! for you to UPDATE! pLEASE upDATE sOoN!
karenho
2007-05-19
ch 8,
abusepls do continue with this story.
i like the plot .. (:
bullet.for.valentine's
2007-05-17
ch 2,
abuseYay, thanks for commenting on my story The Piano! You have no idea how much I appreciate it -especially coming from such a talented author. (:

You write wonderfully, you have such skill. Great job on this one and all the rest! I love how you weave your plots and the way you craft your characters. Lovely.
AnnaChase
2007-04-08
ch 8,
abuseHello,

Wow this is such a great story! I know it's been ages since you updated, but I just came across it and I want more! Please please please write more? :P I love it, and I've been looking for a story like this for quite a while!

x- Anna
GoddessDiana
2007-03-15
ch 8,
abuseI really enjoy this story and can't wait to see what happens.

Keep up the good work!
anonymous
2007-03-02
ch 8, anon.
abuseplease update!
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