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Kyande 2005-11-02 . chapter 2
Neh, have you gone on hiatus too? ::cry:: Hope it's not anything serious and that it's only something horribly normal and boring like schoolwork, and that its nothing serious, and that you'll update again soon. (Hey, I'm allowed to be hopeful, right?)

Take care and hope to see you up and writing again!

Kchan
Morbid Maxwell 2005-08-31 . chapter 11
-O.o- You're upset again?! -^^- I know something that'll make me feel better...but you'll feel worse! Um... *searching in random portal* Ah, here! *Pulls out Gabriels white tiger, hands it to Mephistophilis in exchange for Dante* Ne? Ne? *Gabriel is in the corner, almost in tears* ...heh, don't mind him!

So it was short? So what? ...did you really expect that to be my answer?! WHY?! Make it longer, and and...and ah! ...you're a cruel Mistress... -T.T-

Morbid Maxwell~Will you become a fallen for me?
Kyande 2005-08-24 . chapter 11
::Pats you head:: Ah, I understand cutting it short for the purpose of suspense. ^^ Gah! I guess I'll have to read the next chapter then (like I wasn't going to anyways? lol). Great job!

Kchan
Broken Waiting Angel 2005-08-21 . chapter 11
-falls- OMG! My lime haired cutie is going to kill everyone! AH- ah hahhahahahahahaa!! o_o where'd that evil laugh come from? _> lol great chapter! we all have our short days! XD
afk 2005-08-17 . chapter 11
NO don't kill anyone T_T they'r eall too nice!! well god isn't psh but who cares!?!?

The death book seemes soo cool hahaha XD
LtFurryDude 2005-08-16 . chapter 11
hi... i heart ur story its very ... intiresting and i have no intentions of sending u any "prunes"... yeah...well uh update soon... cya.
afk 2005-08-10 . chapter 10
OMG i luved this chap, it wa sgrand!! but then lucifer if teh owner of the bar right?? and ohh all is geting into place yes yes yes O.o WUV IT! hugs her plushies*

update
Bllatrx 2005-08-09 . chapter 1
Wonderful idea, I absolutly loved this first chapter! It's good to finally read something with a good quality of writing and story structure, I cannot wait to read the rest!
Morbid Maxwell 2005-08-07 . chapter 10
...Dante? Crying? ...'Rainbow', get me a camera before he dries up! XD

Great job Love, most excellent yet again! And yes...I heart penguins!

Morbid Maxwell-Will stop stalking for yaoi
Broken Waiting Angel 2005-08-06 . chapter 10
AH! That was the best and longest chapter! and OMG!! Our poor lime hair fallen! I just want to cuddle and hold him forever and take away his pain! >_< ... this makes me almost happy I stopped believing in God..o_O
Morbid Maxwell 2005-07-31 . chapter 9
Wonderful job, sorry I'm jsut now reviewing...I haven't been on in forever so yay! And yes, I shall congratulate thems...hee's...yes, I am aware I put thems and hee's...PENGUINS!

Morbid Maxwell
Hisagi-Sama 2005-07-08 . chapter 1
good prologue? i'll be reviweing yer other chaps soon i promise but i like this story O.O

Hisagi
Kyande 2005-07-08 . chapter 9
::tilts head:: I was half kidding about my suggestion, but if you still want to write it go ahead. ^^ Very well-written chapter, mon amie!

Kchan
afk 2005-07-06 . chapter 9
more than approprita and just perfect, i think yoiur style is totally descriptive and i luv it cause i can't do it hahaha! Xd update soon, i wanna know what happens with lucifer *huggles a home-,made plushie*
Broken Waiting Angel 2005-07-05 . chapter 9
You know I love this chapter! ^_^ awesome!
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