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| aitvaras 2005-04-20 ch 1, | abuseHm...it seems like some kind of conversation between two people..? I like it. x] And yeah, you probably won't get this review until the 20th. Darn me and my late-night-staying-up habits! |
| yellow-eyed-pirate 2005-04-19 ch 1, | abuseThis is pretty good actually. The only comment I have is how you started it. "All right I will" I don't exactly get that. All right you will what? Just try making that a little clearer because that beginning seemed a little awkward. Great job! |
| Talyn Gray 2005-04-19 ch 1, | abuseYou are special!! Anyway, interesting structure. ;D I like it. |