wow! that is so cool! beautiful! I always wanted to write a book like that... you know, God's daughter falling in love with the devil or even a human woman falling in love with Jesus and Jesus falling in love with her! lol... its a really good idea and I hope you write that book! -Black and White Dreams

Even though I am not a big fan of poetry, I did like this! Keep up the good work, make the story you said you'd make most likely a year back!(according to the copyright on the bottom, lol) Oh, spread thine word on my story please! lol

-New Testament-(Paladin van Exday)

O, that was really scary! I felt like I was the main character...and everything seemed so real...and it was creepy. But yeah, it was really good! _ Yay! Keep writing!

Oh, I loved this. Gorgeous imagery, and a beautifully haunting feeling with it too.

His long, white mane,

Eyes like a storm,

That would pierce your heart

Till it bled.

I liked that part beaucoup.

And YES! Fruit w/ peanut butter is good...I especially like them with apples...heehee.