 JR Black 2005-10-28 . chapter 1Interesting concept. I'm not sure I completely get it. I guess they're able to recreate the women based on the skeleton and dna material? Intriguing, none-the-less. :) |
 NeverFroze 2005-07-16 . chapter 1Interesting. Very interesting piece we have here. It's short though, but who am I to talk? XD |
 scratchfury 2005-06-15 . chapter 1twisted. Wrong. Odd. Whats not to love? A bit short though... could use a little bit more description. Good dialog. Thats often one of the hardest things too... |
 Evelyn Aine 2005-05-26 . chapter 1I loved it. Actually, I had a dream like this once, except it took place at some school. Ever read the Handmaid's Tale? Update soon! |
 Magician-Ashley 2005-05-18 . chapter 1very good I like it a lot. "pecically the ending, and also just telling you that I'm deleting "An art secret" and redoing it keep up the good work! |
 youzi 2005-05-04 . chapter 1An interesting and explorable storyline, very morbid but expresses many issues...like how Silas kept insisting that 'she' must be thin...what i keep wondering about is how is it possible to, well, impregnate a corpse, even ifwe ignore the necrophilic implications... Fascinating piece =D |
 2005-04-20 . chapter 1 Without the summary, I'd have no idea what was going on. Try to encorporate some exposition into the story itself. Silas only caring about whether she was thin is a good idea (why care about a dead woman's personality?) but you might explain the reason why these guys want dead wives. Seems pretty gross to me. |
 DragonLady of Avalon 2005-04-20 . chapter 1A unique idea. a little short, though, make the next ones longer. |
 wikid-faerie 2005-04-20 . chapter 1O, good story. Not the sort of thing you might completely understand straight away but I'm guessing that's the whole idea, it makes you think. :) |