All your lines are so powerful, take my breath away as I utter them in a wonder-struck voice... "Setting quiet tributaries of anguish ablaze" Lovely.

wow... that was just... I'm almost speechless... That was just beautiful. I absolutely loved the line "Diamonds stitched into somber black velvet" Just beautiful, exquisite. I don't know what else to say about it. Just amazing, I wish I could write half as well as this... Brava! Brava! Bravessima!

~Hip

WOW! This has got to be the best poem i've read in a very long time! It's so perfect! I love this so much! WOW! I can't get over how good it is... I can relate so much and ah, I can't even find the words! It's excellent! So excellent! Write on; you have so much talent!

~Anna~