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| topaz07 2006-04-21 ch 1,  | abuseIt's sad how people treat our mother like this. So Sad. Blessed Be. |
| rachel doyle 2005-05-23 ch 1, anon. | abusei thou7ght this was a fantastic poem and should be published as the writer is very imaginative in everything they write |
| Lisa Parry 2005-05-18 ch 1, | abuseWell, as I just said to you, I thought this was a highly intense poem in terms of description, makes you more aware of the damage. By not focussing so much on 'the beauty of nature' as I beleive pastoral poems do it highlights the way us humans treat the Earth inhumanely, almost brutally. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-04-29 ch 1, | abuseA great appeal, overflowing with raw feeling so purposeful and so shredded with doubt and fear, lovely. |
| Tori Keedah 2005-04-21 ch 1, | abuseI agree with this poem Very power and emotional. Oh god. Let others NOT do what us humans did. |
| Mebsie 2005-04-20 ch 1, | abuseThis poem is VERY good. It has a lot of emotions and feeling. You are a wonderful writer and you show your feelings wonderfully. Continue writing! |