Please continue with this story! Its got a really nice beginning... :)

Sorry it took so long for me to review this! But I really like it, it has a different tone than the rest of your stories. It's new, great job! And I already like Berion and I think I'll have mixed feelings about the Prince...update soon, I want to see what happens next! ^_^

-jelie36-

aw!your story is so CUTE!! yup yup. i haven't read anything of urs in a while (haven't had time)but this should be fun.i can't wait to read more.update soon.ok.bye.love u.^.^

I quite enjoyed this. It seems like it could use more depth if you ever decide to rewrite it one day. It works for now though. You could probably find a lot to do with a story like this. Melody does act a bit younger than her ten years. My biggest complaint.Anyway, I hope you add another chapter sometime. I'd like to read it.Cheers!

Nice. New character! I mean REALLY new charater, one I've never met... I liked this chapter, Melody seems sweet, a bit young for a ten year-old, though... maybe she's just overly-cute. Hm, can't wait to meet the prince. Update! And work on your awsome new James story!