 Kioasakka 2007-05-04 . chapter 42S.S. Dailey:
Well, hey, I finally managed to finish it. It has taken me two years, but I have finally remembered to come back and acknowledge stuff I haven't since I was twelve. Great story. I apologize for not reviewing consistantly, but I think I wasn't able to appreciate this story enough to sit through all your chapters. That, and you didn't update for a while and I forgot about fictionpress altogether. :(
I read this from start to finish in two and a half hours just now. In that time, I have laughed, cried, and yelled at Skye for being stupid. XD I'm disappointed she didn't end up with Vaughn (how do you say the guy's name? XD) but I know Zach will be good to her. :3
Anyways, it was great and tomorrow when I'm re-energized I shall read the sequel.
~The Lucy Program (formerly known as Kioasakka) |
 No Wonder 2006-08-08 . chapter 1Aw. That's sad! I'm very intrigued about this genetic facility and what all has taken place there... |
 S. W. Babeh 2006-01-28 . chapter 1Very cool, I am going to read the edited version first though because it is well, edited. Great story! |
 Safekht 2006-01-26 . chapter 43One of the things that has changed about me since I have started writing is the fact that the author leaves a story wide open. I don't know why, or how, but it just really, really annoys me. That being said, there were some moments where you could have given more information about the situation, but overall I got more of a genuine vibe from the story. It's hard to find something original now on the FicPress boards, but you seem to have done quite a good job of it. Hope to see some more of your work at a later date. |
 Safekht 2006-01-26 . chapter 37I know I'm supposed to review the end, but I have to review this chapter because Skye does exactly like me when she doesn't really want to do something, but needs to. Usually I end up playing minesweeper when I need to type up a chapter or do my homework. Except here's the thing - I somehow still manage to suck at it. Oh well, I thought that had some relevance.
As far as chapters go, this is one of my favorites. Little to no typos (none that I could spot, but then again this is me we're talking about), and very relateable. Anyhow, I better get to work on the rest of it. |
 Darkness-Chill 2006-01-21 . chapter 43 Yay! Sequel! (wow, i just reliezed how hyper i am today...) |
 Falkner 2006-01-20 . chapter 42I'm kind of bummed that Brandt died and that Skye didn't end up with Vaughn, for some reason I really liked him, but otherwise, I think the story had a really good ending. It's crazy, but sometimes you just have to kill a character. I'm sorry I didn't read over the Christmas break but I really didn't do much of anything. Anyway, good job and don't quit writing. :) |
 Sketchor 2006-01-19 . chapter 42I can't believe I missed the Epilogue. >_> It didn't show up on my computer last time I reviewed for some reason.
Well, it was nice and long read. I've noticed it's actually rare to see long completed stories around here so I'm glad to see this is one of the finished ones. I enjoyed it. Keep on writin'! (b^_^)b |
 aftashok 2006-01-18 . chapter 42 I really loved that story i never reviewed because i naver actually had time. I love this story. |
 Lady Sakaki 2006-01-18 . chapter 42Yea! Congradulations!! Awesome story, you should feel proud!! You go!! Do the monkey dance! Alright! Um...and all that good stuff. ^-^ Congrats again! |
 Sketchor 2006-01-16 . chapter 41What's a good story without a little tragedy, huh? That was very sad how Brandt bit it and the emotion was done pretty well. I look forward to the final chapter. :) |
 Tasha West 2006-01-15 . chapter 42Aww, it's the end...it's sad that Brandt is dead. I love the ending. A great ending to a great story! Frm Tasha! |
 Darklight Shadow 2006-01-15 . chapter 42So sad!! It's a really sad thing that Brandt's dead... Luckily Chris is trying to get over it... Anyway... I really don't want this story to end... Anyway.. excellent story!! Love it to bits!! |
 Broseph115 2006-01-14 . chapter 13Man! This poor girl! Experimented on, looses 2 sisters, escapes, has to come back again, is told to murder her sister and now everything's fallin apart ... :( but oh well, it makes for a good story...lol...excellent work, I like. |
 Broseph115 2006-01-14 . chapter 9I remember this story! I read up to chapter 8 in one shot and I kinda took a hiatus from FP and forgot about it! I'm glad I'm back, this was a good'n hehe.~Jose |