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| frolic-horror 2008-03-19 ch 3, | abuseIt was a very nice story and I absolutely loved the last chapter. I didn't expect Lovel to be the seme, though he was an alpha wolf so it didn't seem inapropriate either (extra points for this :P). Also the whole hunt-big-prey-for-my-mate was so cute, especially when the mate in question had bought roses for him that he tried to eat (more extra points). |
| Kathleen Moon 2007-09-02 ch 3, | abusesuch a beautiful story, I'm really enjoying your work :) I love how realistic you make your characters and the story |
| Lady Psychic 2007-03-08 ch 3, | abuseThis was a well written and enjoyable story. I liked the names that you gave the characters. |
| D. Empress 2007-02-27 ch 3, | abuseLove it--would be surprised at myself if I didn't since all your stories I've read so far are excellent. You tendency to give your characters names that reflect them in some way is great--names should be more than a bunch of pretty syllables stuck together. |
| the sacred night 2007-02-18 ch 3, | abuseI like this epilogue part best, because it was the most creative. It felt more like reading you rather than reading your paraphrase of someone else. You might have just started at the end of the book and gone on from there, really. You could've made the story complete that way. |
| the sacred night 2007-02-18 ch 1, | abuseI think this is too much like the book to qualify as original fiction, although maybe it diverges more in the coming chapters. It has appeared to diverge somewhat around chapter nine, but up until then it's just like reading a summary of the book, which is kind of boring after you've read the actual book. Even if it does diverge more, I'd say it still doesn't qualify as original fiction, but maybe fanfic. |
| Ionai 2006-06-01 ch 3, anon. | abuseWow, I really liked this! Very well done, and the plot was really interesting. I have to admit, I thought it would turn into one of those "O, werewolf-like creatures making with the tons of furry lovin'" stories, where there's no point to the story other than borderline ** sex. You surprised me entirely by actually having something worth reading^_^. I know you're going to want to strangle me for my next comment(I know how hard it is to write that much!), but it almost seemed too short, and I was begging for more. I can't wait to read more of your stories now. Great job! |
| tmelange1 2005-06-09 ch 3, | abuseThis was a marvelous epilogue. I was almost as frustrated as the two guys :-) Kudos on a great read and thank you. It's a shame this story has come to an end. |
| tmelange1 2005-06-09 ch 2, | abuseGreat story! I enjoyed it immensely. |
| tmelange1 2005-06-09 ch 1, | abuseWhat a fascinating story! Kudos! |
| Aymery 2005-05-26 ch 1, | abuseThis is probably your best story ever! I mean...wow. Please continue:) |
| Sh'arra Rie 2005-04-28 ch 3, | abuseThis is realy good! I lovd the ending and look forword to any more storys you come up with. |
| afk 2005-04-25 ch 3, | abuseOMG! i absolutely luved these two chaps! *_* lovel and chase are so hot! woot! keep getting inspired *hint hint* hahaha |
| afk 2005-04-21 ch 1, | abusewow 10 chaps! amazing! i wanna read more i don't like kolya that much *pout* but blaine i do! and lovel ofcourse!! XD update |
| nikerym 'ksherea 2005-04-20 ch 1, anon. | abusei like it. it'll be interesting to see how things wiht Kolya resolve, and i like the way you characterize Lovel with his naivity about relationships. What i mean is, you do a good job showing how Lovel's inexperience with real humans shows through, particularly in this area. i hope blaine finds his roslin. nice work, and i can't wait to see your next update. |