I like the image of the relentless ticking of the clocking. It can indeed be maddening at time. Good work!

Sweet poem. Though right now time is just not on my side. Keep it up!

oh... pwetty! I like it! *sits fasinated by it* Loved it!

Beautiful. Keep writing, cause you really have a knack for it. I just wrote a new story called "Judith." Check it out, I think you'll like it. Gotta go!~Kate