This is really good Kate. You describe things easily and it is very easy to follow. It is dark, like you said it would be, but it is good just the same.

Wow. Most stories start off weak... but this kind of brings you right off the bat. I love it... it's dark and it's great. Onto chapter ...

Wow Kate. Seriously this is great. I think I might be speechless on this one. It's really f-ing good is all I can say.

Awesome chapters! Can't wait for more!! This is a REALLY good story!

well isnt that a twist?

here's a question... even if they are drunk why don't any of them fight back?

Prohibition Bandit... you do remember how the prohibition actually went right? it was like the biggest joke of a law in history and one of the more embarrassing incedents...

ok... if he's such an annoying a** then why don't you just kill him like you do to the random pedestrian? hum?

ok... you could probably seperate that into multiple as opposed to a single paragraph

very, very good. almost feel sorry for harper, but what's the deal with the doc saying she's an only child? Please update soon!

this is an excellent story and i cant wait for more!! this is really good!

okay,i'm completely confused now, but this is so good! please continue!

messed up again. shame on her. off to read the next chapter!

did i not review this chapter? opps. good chapter, anyway, and i love the interaction between the twins, and harper is the killer right? lol. i hope so. she seems to fit the profile.

very, very, very good chapter, and i love how u write the killer, very realisitic and true. continue!