i like this too. argh i'm so sorry that my reviews are so terrible it's just that i'm out of adderol and can't focus. but you're still great. keep writing :D

Beautiful and so powerful. This is my favorite type of poetry. You have such a way with words. And I also love the imagery. Keep on writing, you have quite a knack for it. I just wrote a new story called "Judith." Check it out, I think you'll like it. Gotta go!~Kate