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| amethystdawn 2005-08-05 ch 1,  | abuse*screams your name* YOU DIDN'T TELL ME YOU HAD A FICPRESS ACCOUNT!>_< Anyways, back to my lovely review... IT'S BEE-OO-TI-FUL! I've said it before in person and I'll say it again online. IT'S FABULOUS AND FANTASTIC! You're so uber-talented! I can't believe our school won't publish this. >_< Darn those nuns... -_- seriously, this pome is breath-taking. I haven't seen a poem like this in ages! You've got your own style girl, and you rock! |
| starbursts and YourLove 2005-04-28 ch 1, | abusewow...very beautiful! This is way awesome-o..I really like it! |
| scudcrow 2005-04-28 ch 1, | abuseNo doubt, this is well written. But the mention of cold (descriptive imagery of the night) and heat felt by touch (contact comfort), further illuminates your point! Good work, K |
| Cherubinos-AlterEgo 2005-04-23 ch 1, | abusewow...i really like this! it's really dramatic(that's a good thing) and moving... really good imagery! keep up the good work! |
| simpleplan13 2005-04-22 ch 1, | abusepowerful and aswesome.. tahnks for your review |
| born-again 2005-04-22 ch 1, | abuseBrilliant. Love the lines,"Scream and maybe they'll hear usRun and pretend that we're free" they just really appeal to me, an the whole form and structure are awesome. |
| angelfromurnightmare 2005-04-21 ch 1, | abusewow powerful and vivid imagery... i'm lovin it! |
| Eternaly Forsaken 2005-04-21 ch 1, | abuseThis was wonderful, The structure adds to the feeling and it was so original and so inspiring that I have to go write a poem myself now. Thank you. R&R one of mine sometime. *~Evelyn Hayden~* |
| laughter at the funeral 2005-04-21 ch 1, | abusethis is really good...very nice...although i'm getting a weird feeling about the structure and format of the poem...and pls..if you have the time...pls do review some of my poems...thanks... truly yours... |
| whyt forest 2005-04-21 ch 1, | abuseThat is so good! Oh gods I hope I don't come across as an overenthusiastic teeny bopper but that has to be one of the best poems I've read in a while, not just on fictionpress but anywhere. Amazing imagery, takes the reader right in. The shortness of the lines is effective- evokes the sharp wind methinks. Well done! ~whyt forest |