I loved the idea about the book! Nice story :)

Ri

Err...Actually, it was really disappointing. Firstly, it's too short. Secondly, it's uninventive. I don't really mind the cliche part but it's like a "no plot" at all! You're just repeating the same words with no elaboration. Just like that. I think you shouldn't say everything that's going to happen in Ruby's conversation with Gina. It's lame. 'cause it's like repetitive in the later part. It kills the story. Do consider a different plot. Don't be discouraged though. The way you form your sentences aren't that bad, but I can't really tell because your story is very short.

so adorable. :)

LOL

lovelovelove

Yes,that was extremely cheesy, but I loved it anyway. :)

ooh that's so cool and romantic and sweet. and it's such a nice title too. hurray for dream come trues

wow...you have me smiling real big here :)...just like she dreamed *sigh* that was so cute! unrealistic but hey that's what we read stories for huh? (to escape reality)...By the way i bet he overheard Ruby talking to Gina and just went for it

It's interesting reading this story lol, although like u said, it's cliche, but wateva, since i wrote cliche stories too haha. It's great that u wrote a story for your best friend. Me, well, i just wrote plainly because of interest. Well, I'm blabbering away here :P Anyway, this story is cool ;)