This was a pretty good poem maybe you should explane more about what really happens in the wars that are going on in the world today.

This is a great poem!!

Why must we spill blood just to conquer a goal given by some guy of higher power?

Anyway, great choice of words. Short and to the point. Good job

i think i get what you mean, my grandfather was in the army, korea, vietnam, and stationed like everywhere... for school we recently went to washington DC and all i could think about while at the vietnam memorial was : there are too many names here, how many did he(he being me grandfather) know. now anf forever, the sound of taps will always get to me... i think it would have meant more if it were a touch longer... but i liked it anyway

Short but powerful! War is killing...maybe even murder. How can it be reconciled?

To sacrifice one's salvation so that others might be free, or saved?

A strange question...would a person damn themselves so others might be saved? Is there some of that in all war? Or at least the misconception of it?

cool. ^_^

SP

Hm, good point to be made here - but it may be more affective if you made it a tiny bit longer. Well, ciao for now! *waves*