 Liebchen Rose 2005-05-03 . chapter 1 Very intresting. Good reads both. NIcely done.~LR |
 Hidden Lies 2005-04-24 . chapter 1Very good. I like the way you put up "Delight in Disorder" as well. Get use of words (hmm... I have no clue what I am saying :>) but it is good. I liked it. |
 l057 1n51d3 2005-04-22 . chapter 1cute. i really liked it. excellant poem to be inspired by.
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 Marylin Mabbs 2005-04-22 . chapter 1I like this. Somehow I can really understand it, and of course it was cute. |
 simpleplan13 2005-04-21 . chapter 1very nice |
 citrus scented 2005-04-21 . chapter 1oh just delicous! hehe i know what you;re describing, well for one guy i do. Anwyay you put it out so well, a real great poem to read, loved it. "half-asleep: your hair’s a mess" just love it! :P |
 inferno tempest 2005-04-21 . chapter 1GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT |
 blackenedxrose 2005-04-21 . chapter 1Very nice. I like the words... Woven nicely. |