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Nocturnium 2005-06-02 . chapter 1
thank yew for all the great reviews you gave me *hugs*. this poem is perfect, i can relate to it as you do to some of mine.
jesusfreak4031 2005-05-02 . chapter 1
Okay... I think that you could take this more than one way. You can take this as love... which is what you have it under... but you can also take it as friendship... well I guess not the kissing part but... I think that friends get a little too close sometimes.
Galadh Niniel 2005-05-02 . chapter 1
Lovely and touching, with a hint of sadness. The repetitions work quite well.
GothicBallerina 2005-04-28 . chapter 1
Aw it's also very sweet. One comment in the first line i think you meant met not meat. meat is a kind of food. met is the past tense of meet. i really like ur poems.
Hidden Lies 2005-04-24 . chapter 1
I really do like this. I know what it feels like. This is really good!
SayIt'sWrong 2005-04-24 . chapter 1
This is really sweet and heartfelt. Nicely done. Just a few typos - apart from that its a great piece! QueenVixta
HoryDory 2005-04-23 . chapter 1
this poem is so cute! i feel that way too!
Infection 2005-04-22 . chapter 1
very romantic.
StrawberryStars 2005-04-21 . chapter 1
Aw, liefie! *huggles* This is so you and *sigh* I just don't know what to tell you...Well-written and very honest. Nice job hun.
citrus scented 2005-04-21 . chapter 1
aw this is adorable!! I think it would workj better without the exclamation marks, but its is really great. A very heartfelt piece - it made me smile :D
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