yes.

heartwrenching. short, but im a fan of short, despite my verbosity. i love your juxtapositions, everyone is chilling, an oxymoron, like loving hate and hating love. confusion and hurt. and the pleading despite the demanding tone. endearing.

kitten xx

NOw this was a good poem. Even with only 25 words, it created a vivid emotion in me, not a picture, but an emotion. It made me feel and see emotions. It was interesting and the spacing of it contributed to the poem's meaning very well, great job.

I LOVE the format for this. It’s so short, but so sweet and powerful. I LOVED the last stanza- it was so beautiful. You’re work is so emotional and beautifully written. I really love it. You’re seriously one of the best poets here I’ve come across. Great work, keep it up!

damn. you're good.

i mean, you're REALLY good.

Short, but so profound and powerful! Beautifully written.

-ShadowNemesis

this is so just awsome!

wow. I loved it. It is soo good. Short, but good.

so simple and yet so profound.

Very cool writing I really enjoyed it.

Rocky :)

what a fantastic poem with such an interesting layout, i really like it.

Wow, thats beautiful.

very touching and heartfelt. I love the flow and the passion to it...great work!

Sorrow

i love this poem it flows so well and great format. i love your writing!

awesome descriptions and I love the flow and rhythm of the poem.

Wow... awesome write! Thank ya for the reviews.

Needa S.