|Reviews for Love me broken|
| Kitten973 8/10/05 . chapter 1
heartwrenching. short, but im a fan of short, despite my verbosity. i love your juxtapositions, everyone is chilling, an oxymoron, like loving hate and hating love. confusion and hurt. and the pleading despite the demanding tone. endearing.
| The Rain's Kiss 6/7/05 . chapter 1
NOw this was a good poem. Even with only 25 words, it created a vivid emotion in me, not a picture, but an emotion. It made me feel and see emotions. It was interesting and the spacing of it contributed to the poem's meaning very well, great job.
| kit feral 6/3/05 . chapter 1
I LOVE the format for this. It’s so short, but so sweet and powerful. I LOVED the last stanza- it was so beautiful. You’re work is so emotional and beautifully written. I really love it. You’re seriously one of the best poets here I’ve come across. Great work, keep it up!
| WiredWords 6/2/05 . chapter 1
damn. you're good.
i mean, you're REALLY good.
| ShadowNemesis 5/30/05 . chapter 1
Short, but so profound and powerful! Beautifully written.
| my failure 5/20/05 . chapter 1
this is so just awsome!
| KerriRane 5/20/05 . chapter 1
wow. I loved it. It is soo good. Short, but good.
| revertedautumn 5/17/05 . chapter 1
so simple and yet so profound.
| Rocky G 5/15/05 . chapter 1
Very cool writing I really enjoyed it.
| something agaisnt you 5/14/05 . chapter 1
what a fantastic poem with such an interesting layout, i really like it.
| lisaslife 5/9/05 . chapter 1
Wow, thats beautiful.
| Sorrowful Dreams 5/3/05 . chapter 1
very touching and heartfelt. I love the flow and the passion to it...great work!
| lonelytourist 4/30/05 . chapter 1
i love this poem it flows so well and great format. i love your writing!
| ambiguityy 4/29/05 . chapter 1
awesome descriptions and I love the flow and rhythm of the poem.
| Needa S 4/28/05 . chapter 1
Wow... awesome write! Thank ya for the reviews.