Really dark and beautiful. Thanks for the review. Very heartening, I am glad you like my attempts to capture the tortures of my soul.

that creates such a beautiful image in my mind...you are a really awesome writer!! oh i like how u name the poem from words in latin, and by the way thnx for the review!

see? you ARE a better writer than me. :D Anyways, I really really enjoyed this one. Very beautifully worded. The descriptions are divine. Every line holds so much depth, just amazing. You are an amazing writer. Brava! Brava! Bravessima!

~Hip

cool. i like this poem.