I saw your review for Youth In Asian and liked it so much I decided to check out the poetry behind the author. =) I thought this poem was very arcaic. I got the sense of cold, oily expanses, and wolves (I'm a big fan of night poetry, I am very intrigued by how you percieved the night.) I did however find a few places in which, I honestly thought were a bit too commonly used in other poetry. Um, I guess the big thing was: (Crystal tears)

Enchanting and lovely. Deep with forboding...

hey this one is good. thanks for the review. i would write keep writing but that would seem stupid. ive gotten a couple of those. and now i am rambling. it one of those nights...

I liked it. It was cool. And it was different.

This one is neat. Not as good as Lux Lucis though... This one has good meaning, but it certainly doesn't have the flow that Lux Lucis has. I do like this though. It has depth and meaning to it, and it's a great description of night happenings. Not one of your best, but still good. Brava!

~Hip

oh this is really really good! i have a poem sorta like this except urs is better, lol.