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| WarriorHeart 2006-01-29 ch 11,  | abuseI love Tavis. He speaks what should be said. I hope Liz can pull her ** together. |
| TheAngelofhope 2006-01-29 ch 1, | abuseNice story you got going here. Keep up the good work. |
| WarriorHeart 2005-12-07 ch 10, | abuseI like your introduction of Travis into the story. |
| WarriorHeart 2005-11-06 ch 9, | abuseSuch a great chapter! I love being able to see all of the characters to involved with each other. But the ending!! Oh, update soon! ; ) |
| WarriorHeart 2005-10-28 ch 8, | abuse*hugs them all* I love these guys to death! Keep writing!! Update soon! I need more! |
| WarriorHeart 2005-10-14 ch 7, | abuseIt made me want to cry at the end. Good work. |
| WarriorHeart 2005-10-14 ch 6, | abuseWow, how I can relate to the awkwardness... |
| WarriorHeart 2005-10-06 ch 5, | abuseI seriously flipped out when I saw the update notcie for this!! Oh, it was so excited that you posted do soon! I Enjoyed the sweetness and tension between Jay and Liz. I can't wait to find out what Liz is gonna say to MB. |
| WarriorHeart 2005-10-05 ch 4, | abuseHaha, about damn time... kinda wich there was more detail to the whole ending, in reguards to feelings. can't wait for the next update!! please make it soon! |
| WarriorHeart 2005-04-28 ch 3, | abusegood chappy! please make the next one longer! |
| WarriorHeart 2005-04-23 ch 2, | abuseoo neat. more soon! ; ) |
| Laralie 2005-04-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseInteresting start...i like it so far |
| WarriorHeart 2005-04-21 ch 1, | abusecan't wait for the next chapter. |