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Reviews For: Sparkling Eyes
Fallen Corrupted Angel 2005-07-01 . chapter 1
Sinister...
Nobody-n-Particular 2005-05-17 . chapter 1
That last line was perfect, and caught me off-guard.
Made in U.S.A. 2005-05-12 . chapter 1
the end is a bit disturbing but the poem is wonderfull nonetheless. keep writing :D
ifitaintkatie 2005-04-21 . chapter 1
Whoa. That was pretty at first, but a bit scary at the end. Oh well, it adds something to the poem, I think. I loved how you described the eyes, but when I found out they were lifeless, it was sad. :P Cya.~Kate
M L 2005-04-21 . chapter 1
Muahahaha
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