I love all your poems! It sounds like some inner feeling acted as a cataylst for this poem. Try playing with punctuation. . .

oh wonderful~! speacilly the last stanza. theres great descriptions in here they really capture the feeling of brushing something away- wicked idea.

That was really cool! i like the ending

|:) carbonic

interesting, something to brush off ur shoulder as if it was never there, but you know that it was, nice poem

very good!! i like it

Ah, that's pretty cool. It's a frightening thing to suffer from... I like the ending.~!