   Mistress K. Darq-Chylde 2005-11-15 . chapter 3Poor girl... Need more.. MORE NOW! |
 amaya dwyn 2005-09-26 . chapter 3MARRISA! I really love it. You must write much much more. Soon. Maybe stay home from school, forfit some sleep... |
 LghtAngel 2005-07-02 . chapter 2woW. I can't wait for more! |
| Mistress K. Darq-Chylde 2005-06-11 . chapter 2 Nice. Not lots of action, but downtime to build things up in necessary. Unless you're a sadistic psycho like me who rarely lets the poor babies rest. *sniffles* But that's what they get for keeping me up until 3 a.m. writing about them!
And also... I have a chapter 3 up! |
| amaya dwyn 2005-06-03 . chapter 2 ahh, that is awesome... i expect another chapter in about, eh, forty five minutes. |
| Mistress K. Darq-Chylde 2005-06-01 . chapter 1 Graah! Why has no one else reviewed this?!?!?!?!
To put it bluntly, this is one of the best pieces I've seen from you so far. Eagerly awaiting an update!
~K. |
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