This is so beautiful. Nighttime is my most favourite time of day, it's so peaceful and gorgeous. You've really captured everything wonderful about it in this poem, and I'm so adding it to my favourite stories list! =)

That's a really nice poem, I luv it!

Another 'last line' wonder. I can almost hear the stars in this poem...

Night IS beautiful, isn't it? I loved the repetition,and the pattern. Keep up the good work.

Thank you so much for the wonderful review. I'm sorry about your friend and im glad I've found someone who can totally relate to how lost i can feel. But anyway...down to buisiness. This poem was so beautiful. The way it all flowed together really helped me visualize and experience a wonderful and calm night. I could almost feel my soul soar into the heavens. Thanks again for the good review; now I'm a little more encouraged to post more of my poems.

good word choice but your poem form seems unchangin and somwhay stagnant

i would like to see varied form but hey thats just me

-aaron

Whoa... very smooth. i like the undertone. it's seems like you are asking what freedom really it... and i know for sure no one can answer that..

nachness rating: 9/10

This was a great poem. I loved it. You wrote it so perfectly, the words you used were so powerfulKeep it up~devil-apprentice~

I love the night, so mysterious, so much to discover. I'm gonna assume there is suppose to be metaphor, I took it literally and it sounds beautiful. It reminds me of a flower that only blooms in darkness. Thank you for the review. I always review people who review me.

Good, but your rhyming wasn't always the same in each stanza. I prefer, also, for stanzas to be separated. Overall, though, it expressed feeling in a great way. Good job.

Beautiful night: beautiful poem. Love it. My poem, Shades of the Blues is like the opposite of this. I see the beautiful night but my sorrows prevent me from feeling it. Anyway, great work. Please R&R some of mine and i'll do the same for you.>Santi

Beautiful description of the night..haha...keep writing =D

I liked it. It was interesting. It had good detail in it. And i liked the rymeing.

this is really really good! I love the flow and the rhythm. This is just a wonderful piece!

~Sorrow~

this was nice. sounded like you were dreaming you were flying/free and you woke up just lying down looking up. it was interesting. i feel like i've heard this before.