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| Sweet Persephone 2007-03-11 ch 1, | abuseThat was great. Very cool. And sad. |
| Named Gene 2006-04-15 ch 1, | abuseO, I'm a big fan of mostly dialogue pieces - I feel like they require much more subtlety than standard fair. My favorite part is where they both begin to speak at once and all their words become this fat cluster, and then...awkward silence ("Uh..."). Hee, nice. |
| KonekOniko 2005-04-26 ch 1, | abusethis is a rather powerful piece, and i would be intrigued to see how it would sound with sensory details because this by itself is very powerful. very good job ^-^ |